As
the new millennium dawned, Peaches Pengilly was born with challenges.
A rare form of Muscular Dystrophy wracks her body
making every movement a struggle. However, she has a secret weapon, family.
Renowned medical researcher, Elise Pengilly is her mother, while her father
Kahl Pengilly leads the field in human robotic engineering. They have a built
Peaches a muscle building body suit. Until now she has been too young to try it, but on her fifteenth birthday she suits up for the first time.
Dr Nicholas Off, an albino wombat owning despot,
sees the potential to create an army of cyborgs if he can obtain the suit and
its plans. He has co-opted ISIS to enslave the oil rich empires of the Middle
East, but he wants more, he needs to defeat Isis with troops of his own, Super
human beings who will do whatever it takes to carry out his demands.
Peaches sees her parents and Aunt killed when the
terrorists bomb the Australian of the Year award presentation in Canberra. The
suit works, it protected her and she makes her getaway.
Although saddened by her loss she makes a vow on her
mother’s body to find the killers and bring them to justice.
A fall or a push, somehow Peaches makes a circuit
between the tram and the high voltage cables. Her muscles bulge and she grows
stronger until the Kevlar begins to rip. Watching from a rooftop, Dr Off
smiles, he thought as much. Now all he has to do is get the data to replicate
Peaches’ parent’s work.
That night Peaches studies the volumes hidden in the
underground vault. She has become Millennium Girl
Looks cool, Toby. Now as the albino wombat digs its way toward the vault....
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr Smith, I hope it works out okay for our girl.
ReplyDeleteOkay so we have a grasp of whats going on, but expand your mind, why limit the readership by setting it in Australia. The characters work, but the plot's a bit thin. Build it more, set it in another place make up a name, what is done there and who are the criminals and dastardly devils they are working for. Oh, and get your homework done.
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